AI pictures, Turnus

 Since we did pictures of Cora and Jax in the last post, let's try Turnus. And oh my.

I don't think this is what I had in mind at all. way too pretty. Let's try again. And actually, I ran out of free images in Copilot, so let's try Gemini

The pendulum has swung too far the other direction. A few issues:

What improved:

• Two-handed axe is correct now — proper size, both hands on it ✓
• Raw forward energy and momentum — no longer posing ✓
• Battle chaos in the background works well ✓
• Not polished or celebrity-looking ✓

What went wrong:

• He's too old — looks closer to 50s, maybe even 60s. Turnus is late 30s. This reads as a grizzled veteran, not a man just beginning to gray
• Too Viking — the fur trim, double-headed axe, and wild long hair push him into Norse warrior territory. He's a desert mercenary commander, not a Norseman
• Hair is too long and wild — should be shorter and naturally unkempt, not a flowing Viking mane
• Beard too long and full — stubble or short rough beard, not a full warrior beard
• He's lost the handsome quality entirely — went from too pretty to too brutish. The book describes him as genuinely handsome, just in a dangerous way

And after giving that feedback, the AI seems to have ignored it. It just put the funny fur onto someone else. 

Honestly, I kind of liked the longer hair better. Anyway, let's do one last picture.

I'm not sure why he is looking crazy with his Ax, but ok. Otherwise, I think the face is quite good at this point, maybe a little older than late 30s.

Claude's one complaint, which I think is actually funny, "The only real fix needed is Cora's hair up in a ponytail. Everything else is working. This is close to a keeper." Which it clearly is. 

Turnus — strong

• Commanding the center of the room ✓
• Ruggedly handsome, reads correctly now ✓
• Dark armor, two-handed axe ✓
• Still a touch old but much more acceptable in context ✓

Jax — excellent

• Entering from the doorway exactly as written ✓
• Dark straight hair ✓
• Slim but hard build ✓
• The armor reads as brigandine ✓
• Age looks right, early 20s ✓
• This is the best Jax has looked yet

Cora — close but one clear issue

• Skin tone good ✓
• Hair color is closer to auburn ✓
• Hair is down, not in a ponytail — that's a consistent character detail from the very first line she appears in the book
• Chainmail armor is reasonable

Setting — outstanding

• Clay walls, torches, rough interior ✓
• Other mercs at a table with what looks like a map in the background — perfect for the planning scene ✓
• Desert visible through the open door ✓

AI pictures, Jax and Cora

 So this blog is probably just as much a story about AI as it is about Manetera. Today I have some pictures for you.  The first is Jax as rendered by Copilot.

I think I like the bottom left here best, as it has the most character and depicts Jax well. Here, I think he is going to go into a bit of rage-induced fit. See the almost big smile on his face and his bloodied sword. 

Next it made an image of Cora, which is ok.

I'm not sure ever uses a buckerler though.

Next, we see her throwing a spear, but it doesn't look quite right...

Claude helped me prompt this next round. Cora as someone who lives in the desert, will have darker skin, which is shown in the next version. Also, her hair color wasn't quite auburn here.

I do wonder why she is holding the shield like that and the spear like that... 

Clause agreed on the color, too.

Suggested addition to the prompt:
"Auburn hair — dark reddish-brown, NOT bright red or ginger. The red tones are subtle warmth in a predominantly brown base, not a vivid copper or flame color."

This looks like brown hair to me. This is how my chats with Copilot usually go, a lot of back and forth.

Now this looks like red highlights. I think I give up.