Sunday, May 31, 2026

An AI written status update.

 As a bit of a tangent, I'm not sure a blog that is often written by AI is going to convince anyone to read these books, which are not written by AI. That said, if I write absolutely nothing, I think that is a certainly (that books aren't going to sell that is.)


Anyways, here is a status update, written by AI, mistakes and all:


Current work is focused entirely on The Brotherhood of Light. We are systematically applying the first round of line edits and structural feedback received from Bennion (Leafbound Review).

Recent updates to the manuscript include:

  • Pacing: Tightening the flow of the early chapters to establish a quicker narrative hook.

  • Dialogue: Sharpening the interactions between the initiates—specifically Brumdin and Folen—and their instructors to better highlight the rigid environment of the Order.

  • Continuity: Cleaning up early formatting and structural rough spots to ensure the prose is seamless before the draft moves to a final proofreader.

The next step is finishing these revisions while continuing to build our audience infrastructure through the Leafbound Review newsletter.


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An AI written status update.

 As a bit of a tangent, I'm not sure a blog that is often written by AI is going to convince anyone to read these books, which are not w...